More commentary po.etry created in comment stream between Mark and myself.
This is quite addicting — you should try it.

Coloring Outside the Lines

A washed in clouds

Thunder echoes within

Lightning strobes ‘crossbreeding sky

Arroyos want to taste their tears

Cracked lips moisten

Emptiness smiles like a vulture

Wheeling overhead

Despondency it’s course

Longing its reason

Regret it’s will

Remote it’s undoing

Commentary poetry by Lorraine and myself. Her words are italicized. She has more of them that can be seen at https://myfrillyfreudianslip.wordpress.com

other examples of commentary po.ems

https://myfrillyfreudianslip.wordpress.com/2017/01/28/conceit-of-lies/

https://project21words.wordpress.com/2017/01/31/tango-for-one/?preview=true

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