Another commentary po.em through Mark and my collaboration. My words/comments are in italics.
This stream is yielding po.ems for both: Awash in Clouds constructed by Mark.
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after the fall
eternity measured in moments
beginnings end abruptly
despondency it’s course
longing it’s reason
regret it’s will
remorse it’s undoing
revelations and repulsions
both equally melt into shade
© Lorraine & Mark
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February 1, 2017 at 12:51 am
Reblogged this on Coloring Outside the Lines and commented:
Please take a look. Two together on onepoem
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February 1, 2017 at 2:29 am
https://in25wordsmoreorless.wordpress.com/2017/02/01/commentary-po-etry-drought/
Lack of sleep — getting carried away?!
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February 1, 2017 at 8:57 am
Great image for it. You have made a fish out of the words! I’m barely awake here but the tail is on top… Every layer has a different feel. The starting point changes the end.
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February 1, 2017 at 8:32 pm
As long as I don’t sound like a fish out of water, lol.
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February 1, 2017 at 8:35 pm
Not yet, but you may get there
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