Another commentary po.em through Mark and my collaboration. My words/comments are in italics.

This stream is yielding po.ems for both: Awash in Clouds constructed by Mark.

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after the fall

eternity measured in moments

beginnings end abruptly

despondency it’s course

longing it’s reason

regret it’s will

remorse it’s undoing

revelations and repulsions

both equally melt into shade

© Lorraine & Mark