Another commentary po.em well crafted by Mark from our commentary string. Reblogged without reading as I am still composing my po.ems from the same string where time unspooled, rainbow puddles splashed, and we traveled through the universe. So, more to come from me (and from Mark, I suspect)
Days of reckoning, days of glory?
Finish lines in moving sand
Vaulting into hyperspace
Passing future pasts
Foot race to reason
Across ribbon candy fantasy land
Another commentary po.em from Lorraine andmyself. Her words are italicIzed. More of her words are located at https://myfrillyfreudianslip.wordpress.com and http://25wordsmoreorless.wordpress.com
I'm listening . . . . . .