The box was inlaid with wood the colour of almonds. Inside, she kept her most precious belongings. Sand dollars and beach glass. Single droplet earing of jet prisms. Chandelier crystal. Blue hair ribbon and resin sunflower barrette. Each item in the inventory held special meaning; helped her remember happier times, lost lovers, passion, adventures. After many moves, the contents remained more whole than she. (c) Lorraine
SoCS (jusjojan): would/wood; #cyw: almond
January 28, 2017 at 10:27 am
The last line – the content being more whole than she ….. wow! that really closes the story and adds such an emotional punch! great writing
and just because, in no relation to, or maybe because of …. but just because …. ((((Lorraine)))) take care of yourself and rest up after the clinic sessions.
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January 28, 2017 at 11:09 am
Just came to me — no planning intended. Had no idea exactly.
Thanks for the hugs, and here’s some back at you for your aches and pains ((((((Pat))))). Got some comment poetry to work out and work on — two out of one stream we think.
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January 28, 2017 at 11:10 am
thanks for the hugs ….. and have fun and enjoy your projects :)
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