Turtles sang his songs of longing; little fishes cried his tears.
He ached for a queen, for a lover to share his lake of emerald-green delight. But water nymphs oft live out their lives alone. So faded the gem-stone.
One day, as he swam his kingdom’s perimeters, his heart thud-lumped – could it be? Was this his dappled-dream?
She did not flee when she saw him, only modestly bowed her head. Her dress was the colours of deepest sunsets on the water turning to darkest night. Her hair sun-sharded gold. The entwined pearls like stars on the dark surface of the waters.
And thus they courted; she stayed firm by his side through angry storms when waves rolled the lake creatures and the contours of her dress. She held tight to her handkerchief and his heart. Came the ritual exchange of gifts – he place a string of tiny spiral shells around her beautiful neck and he caught her handkerchief as she let it flutter on the current towards him.
He had true found his love, his mistress. She bent her head to receive her crown, her lover’s tiara of water lotus and lily pad. And his skin glowed and his dark hair flowed loose with the currents. Alone no more.
When the little fishes nibbled at her toes, you could scarce see the rock and rope chafe scar once angry red, now watery white, ‘round her delicate ankle, anchoring their love forever.
A few words for Jane Dougherty’s Microfiction Challenge 19: under the sea.
© my frilly freudian slip
October 27, 2016 at 11:03 am
I love the poetic language of this.
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October 27, 2016 at 11:59 am
Thank you. The image was very striking.
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October 27, 2016 at 5:00 pm
It was!
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October 27, 2016 at 10:34 am
What lovely language. It has a soft, flowing feel to it, like being caught in the current. Lovely stuff.
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October 27, 2016 at 11:59 am
His hair made me think of floating in the ocean or more specifically in the tidal river in front of my grandmother’s house. Watching the seaweed bend with the tide.
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October 27, 2016 at 2:07 pm
That hair is beautiful, isn’t it? As you say, just like seaweed – gorgeous
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October 27, 2016 at 8:56 pm
I would love to have hair like that especially since I have been losing mine over the past two years. Down about 2/3rds, and not growing back like it usually does after a big shed.
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October 28, 2016 at 3:28 am
I’m sorry to hear that. It can come back, though, even after some while. All the best
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October 22, 2016 at 4:01 am
The flow lilts and drifts towards a real heart-stopped of an ending. Loved it :)
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October 23, 2016 at 5:50 am
Thank you, Jane. I always knew his bride had drowned (fallen in, suicide) — then anchored love popped in.
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October 21, 2016 at 6:19 pm
Lovely response Miss Frilly, I did enjoy your lyrical tone as well….
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October 23, 2016 at 5:47 am
Thank you, kind sir. : ] :
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