image: © Jennifer Pendergast
She sighed; he’d spread his toys all over the floor. Again.
“All his favourites,” she murmured, lovingly placing each back into the battered toy chest.
She remembered how he’d acquired each one: firetruck passed down from great-grandfather Joziah; legos from a Happy Meal at Mikey D’s; Santa head eraser from the very bottom of his Christmas stocking. Had it really been four years?
She turned off the light, and stood for a moment in the door way.
Tommy watched his mother silently crying. “Don’t worry, Mom. I won’t forget. I’ll put them out so we can play again tomorrow night.”
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November 9, 2021 at 7:14 pm
Awww… Not the only one who wrote a heart-wrenching ghost story from this. Can’t even with the chills from this one. Well done.
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November 8, 2021 at 1:20 pm
This was lovingly written, Lorraine.
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November 12, 2021 at 3:46 am
Thanks. I am sure that when mothers lose children, a connection remains. A bond continues.
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November 12, 2021 at 8:18 am
I can tell you it does.
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November 8, 2021 at 11:18 am
So the mother knows it’s a ghost, and she is not afraid but comforted. I imagine he’ll stop coming when her healing is well under way. Tender story.
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November 12, 2021 at 3:47 am
They are healing each other. Yes, he will probably fade as a ghost, but not as a remembory with his mother.
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November 7, 2021 at 8:24 am
I love the simple reply at the end that says so much. Well done.
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November 7, 2021 at 8:30 am
Thanks. When I saw the image, I thought child’s ghost. Perhaps because I recently re-watched The Sixth Sense.
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November 7, 2021 at 7:24 am
A lovely and gentle ghostly tale. Maybe he’s there until she’s ready to let go. So well written!
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November 7, 2021 at 8:29 am
Thanks, I was thinking the same.
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November 7, 2021 at 6:56 am
Dear Lorraine,
Touching and subtle ghost story.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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November 10, 2021 at 12:40 am
Thanks, Rochelle. An interesting prompt picture to work from.
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November 6, 2021 at 4:40 pm
Wonderful story. Well done.
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November 10, 2021 at 12:41 am
Thanks, Bill.
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November 6, 2021 at 6:27 am
That’s heartbreaking, for ghostie and mum. Great touching story.
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November 10, 2021 at 12:41 am
Yes, heart-breaking. But at least the connection remains. Perhaps someday, each will be able to let go.
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November 5, 2021 at 10:06 am
Aww, so sad and yet s sweet. Well done.
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November 6, 2021 at 12:30 am
Thanks. A bit of left over Halloween candy.
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November 5, 2021 at 7:47 am
Such a touching tale, well done Lorraine.
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November 6, 2021 at 12:28 am
Thanks. A left over bit of Halloween.
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November 5, 2021 at 5:03 am
He’s a playful little spook
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November 6, 2021 at 12:27 am
Yes, he’s permenantly in play mode.
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