feature image: “Marianna in the South,” J. W. Waterhouse, 1897
Who is that wizened hag peering at me? Face creased, riven; hair all thin and grizzle. Time ravished and shrunken.
Wonder who she was when young? A high-born lady or a low-born lander? How did she make her way in the world to grow so old?
Why does she stare so? I am minding mine own business, and yet there she is watching me as if I a hawk to pounce upon her feral chickens.
I turn from her relentless glare. Look down upon my veined hands, same as reflected in the looking-glass and weep.
reflections for sammi’s weekend writing prompt #235.
The challenge is simple: each week you will be given an exact number of words you can use to write a poem or piece of prose. You can use any format or style you like; go wherever your inspiration takes you. The only rules are these:
- your poem / prose must contain this week’s word (see note below). The word does not have to count towards the exact word count total – it can be in the title, or the first letters of the lines of a poem can spell it out – you can be as creative as you want as long as it’s there somewhere.
- the length of your poem / prose must match the number of words stated in this week’s challenge. No more. No less.
- A note on the word: you can use any variation of the word (for example: call, calls, calling, called etc). If you find you are struggling to use this week’s word you may substitute it for a synonym – just include a note to explain the swap. Remember, this is supposed to be fun!
I choose to use the word looking-glass rather than mirror as it seemed to “fit” better.
November 15, 2021 at 3:01 pm
Oh yes, tell me about it. Who is that old crone in the mirror, inside I’m still 30, aren’t I? Great story.
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November 14, 2021 at 9:08 pm
Ah, yes. The privilege denied many. How TF did I manage to get so old? Well done refection of the sorrow of lost youth. Hopefully, not wasted.
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November 14, 2021 at 4:15 pm
Beautifully written 💜
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November 15, 2021 at 5:05 am
Thanks. I often see my mother staring back when I look into the mirror. How did I get to look so old. Unfortunately, I do remember.
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November 15, 2021 at 5:16 am
Me too, not only do I see my mother I see my sister Mary, who died five years ago . Where do the years go? 💜
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November 16, 2021 at 1:33 am
I think the years go to the same place as the single sock, dropped jewelry, $, etc.
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November 16, 2021 at 2:24 am
Yes especially the errant sock !
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November 16, 2021 at 4:20 pm
Yes! I wrote a post one time about a portal to the planet Kleto. Kleptonians love socks the most. Only if mismatched, of course, so they crept in through the portal and snatch the odd sock. Wonder if they take the right or the left? Husband’s socks have designer logo, so I know which sock was kleptoized.
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November 16, 2021 at 6:57 pm
They are cunning little beasts are they not….. Do the also sneak into our wardrobes at night and sew our clothes up so we think we are putting weight on or are they from another portal altogether? 👽
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November 14, 2021 at 3:00 pm
Wow, a beautifully described scene, sad though it is. And I must say, i love the name of your blog, that really made me smile :-)
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November 14, 2021 at 3:47 pm
Glad to cause a smile. It comes from a discussion I had with a friend. He commented that I’d made a “Freudian slip,” and I replied, “well, mine is frilly, don’t know if Freud’s was.”
The look happens when I glance in the mirror or see my reflection in a shop window, and it’s my mother looking back at me.
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November 14, 2021 at 3:55 pm
Ha ha! Freud’s probably was frilly; to help his research in getting into a woman’s brain! He was so obsessed with the workings of women. Yes, I think we do resemble older family members more as time passes :-)
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November 14, 2021 at 3:56 pm
My friend suggested it was at least a pink slip.
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November 14, 2021 at 4:05 pm
Ha ha ha! Indeed, Lorraine :-)
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