experimental experience I: chef-d’œuvre du corps
yesterday, we made art
you, so adroit; stripping
me of all vestiges
shredding; trail of
hat, red parka, buckle boots
self-confidence, coyness
across shop-worn wooden floor
that
kiss upon tip of nose;
breast cupped
in gruff hand
moaning into your fingers
my body the canvas
for your latest
master class
free writes, experimental experiences, quick studies: all are so[u]c writings; lightly edited, nervously offered. i am not a po.et; po.etics come as unfiltered oddities.
words from wordle #260: yesterday; art; adroit; vestige[s]; hat; red; parka; kiss; nose; cupped; gruff; canvas
October 4, 2021 at 10:32 pm
there is a lovely, slightly nervous translation in this – it stops and starts, and fumbles (just the image painted, not the word flow) which makes this ride on the edge of a whispered encounter …. definitely interesting for a SoCs with a wordle combo …. I like the idea – it’s playful and I guess kind of liberating as well …. word sketch on!
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October 5, 2021 at 3:55 am
Thanks. Don’t know when the mood will re-emerge. I like just letting the wordle words form themselves into something. I almost played with it, wanting to make a double-up poem/split verse.
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October 5, 2021 at 10:03 am
letting the words speak is a very good thing …. :)
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October 5, 2021 at 10:53 am
True. Now I’m off to bubble dance. See one of my previous comments. ; )
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October 5, 2021 at 10:57 am
Enjoy the dance! I bid you a wonderful slice out there and a most lovely day 💖
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October 4, 2021 at 5:57 pm
Absolutely stunning 💜
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October 5, 2021 at 3:42 am
Thanks. I used to do po.etry more — look at the poe.try prompts. But, when my muse went to the retreat in Patagonia, she took po.etry with her, lol.
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October 5, 2021 at 5:44 am
That’s extremely selfish of her because you have a talent 💜
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