Another five minute writing exercise*, based on the Tale Weaver prompt 201: morning.
“This week I am asking you to consider the concept of morning.
For some of us, it is a welcome sight, for others the complete opposite.
What does morning mean to you?
Do you have a morning story?
Your response can be a true reflection or a piece of fantasy.”
I sit at the computer, close my eyes and go. What comes out is unedited, raw. Sometimes I share, sometimes I don’t. The opening line became a Mobius loop. I needed to expel this from my brain, so my mind can wander elsewhere.
Orange-tipped talons of dawn snatch moon from sky; scratch out starscape.
Both sides have been waiting, breath held, unable to sleep, to dream.
Praying.
To whatever gods they hold sacred.
I have grown old on the battlefield.
I no longer look up for absolution or courage.
Lines are formed: ragged, jagged; military precise.
It matters not when the canons spew death.
The bayonets skewer.
The axe breaks shield and arm.
Arrow finds the heart.
Bombs blast tanks and body armour.
Mushrooming mortality.
We stand to attention.
For generals, commanders
a million miles away.
Always ready.
For at dawn,
we attack.
image: © Lorraine
*I have tried to incorporate at least 5 minutes of creative writing into my day using prompts, or thoughts that pop in and out of the sieve I call a brain.
December 20, 2018 at 6:17 am
I am amazed at your raw writing. You have words sewed in a beautiful outfit.
Cheers
MeenalSonal from AuraOfThoughts
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December 23, 2018 at 2:35 pm
Thank you!
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December 28, 2018 at 7:29 am
Thank you — I love the imagery in your comment.
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December 19, 2018 at 12:05 am
Excellent piece Lorraine, sometimes it is about letting the words flow as they might….thanks for your contribution.
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December 28, 2018 at 7:29 am
You are welcome, Michael. An early happy new year!
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December 28, 2018 at 4:37 pm
Thanks Lorraine and a happy new year to you. May our fingers never run out of ideas 😁
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December 17, 2018 at 11:18 am
it’s amazing how socs – raw writing – without any input, filters, censoring often produces “just the right” — amount of words, ideas, streams, images …. and honestly, the energy, the spontaneity, the flow, it speaks with the power and volume, just as it is meant to be —- and that is and yields a beautiful result …
which is the case here ….
seriously.
so, apart from the “sieve” brain, well, sometimes, unless I’m much mistaken, which is often the case, perhaps the “magic” really is just allowing the flow to carry itself and us, along – :)
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December 17, 2018 at 2:40 pm
You are right about the magic of the flow. It draws me towards the keyboard, even if I know how much pain that will cause. Why I have to post raw stuff; the pain of editing can outweigh the desire to post an “acceptable” draft of my mind’s wanderings.
And yes, I should let myself flow more. When I “try”, the mind dries up. When I drift, well, you never know . . .
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December 17, 2018 at 3:19 pm
when the words need “outing” then we suck it up and go for it — and honestly, I have observed over a rather long period of time, that very often, the “raw” has often been percolating in the brainstew and so often comes out just right – so, since pain is obnoxious enough, and we needs must, best to just do what we can, because it seems to me, if we keep waiting on the “perfected” moment\time\situation/word scenario etc. it could be a long time coming …. so yeah, just enjoy what you’re doing, when it comes, and needs to – that’s what truly counts
(((((((Lorraine)))))))) for the VBEP …. I’m still wickedly crunching too :P
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December 28, 2018 at 7:37 am
So right, and I’ve taken my time to stew the comment for a while.
The raw also invites new characters to emerge. And yes, I suspect they have been hiding there, all along, whispering to me.
I do try to free write (as you suggested) on a semi-regular basis.
When I turn my mind off, I am apt to write. I tend to overthink (on every thing) which means I really don’t think at all — I react, or withdraw. My writer’s block is trying too hard.
Hope you’re not crunching too hard and deep.
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December 30, 2018 at 2:23 pm
Nodding in agreement and understanding …. overthink everything leads to paralysis – I sooooo get that …. and it’s not just about spontaneous acts of creation, like writing, but if seeps in and stains everything so that we end up stuck for it — and it’s such a huge energy drain :(
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