you lay claim to me,
body, soul and spirit
with your pheromone of spice
but I am not the receptacle of
the scent of your lust
I chose for my body citrus: lemon, lime, and orange
cinnamon makes me sneeze and itch – an allergy
to spices and to your sense of control
Guess I took a contrarian approach to the wonderfully sensual words of Michael Ondaatje. A writer, poet, person I truly do admire. Thanks for sharing him! mlmm sunday writing prompt: the cinnamon peeler by Michael Ondaatje.
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October 22, 2018 at 5:30 pm
great use of the contrarian – the citrus bites back to the earthy but somewhat prickly cinnamon – and as for a translation/inspiration of the original point of inspiration? works particularly well – sort of like a conversation/response :)
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