u get what u wish 4 – mysterious mysterious message on her computer screen. Suicide note, police decided.
Took all night. Bruised and battered, she lay with last of life draining as night sky leaked dawn’s blood.
If only she had known before saying, jealously, into that mirror at midnight: “Wish I was a fly on the wall while he’s screwing that witch.”
(c) Lorraine
a bit of a buzz, a flyspeck of writing in the raw for Sunday Photo Fiction 30.04.17
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May 1, 2017 at 8:55 am
That was a nasty mirror. I didn’t know they brought death. Sad story but good writing, Lorraine. :) — Suzanne
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May 1, 2017 at 9:14 am
I think the witch had a bit to do with it to. Thanks for the encouraging comment.
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April 30, 2017 at 3:36 pm
Ouch, what a way to go, talk about a run of bad luck…
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April 30, 2017 at 4:08 pm
You said it! Watch out for those midnight mirrors!
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April 30, 2017 at 3:03 pm
Ha! That’s a fine lesson, right there!
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April 30, 2017 at 4:08 pm
Thanks!
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April 30, 2017 at 8:34 am
Whoops. That didn’t go the way she planned. Good story
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April 30, 2017 at 10:32 am
Had this image of the fly kamikazing the keyboard to leave a message.
Always liked the Vincent Price version of “The Fly.”
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April 30, 2017 at 10:37 am
I never saw that one. Only the Jeff Goldblum version.
“You’re getting worse!”
“No. I’m getting better“
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April 30, 2017 at 8:09 am
Be careful what you wish for!
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