pain makes you beautiful
hollows your cheeks
etches filigree, fine lines
upon your face
trace
© Lorraine
composed for: mlmm writing prompt February 19th randomize
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February 20, 2017 at 8:07 pm
Awesome piece – great prompt idea – and wow – what fascinating combos are turning up!
Loved what you did with this :)
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February 20, 2017 at 10:35 pm
Thanks — aren’t the results amazing. Michael and I would love to use it too.
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February 20, 2017 at 10:37 pm
I saw as I was reading through the comments on Michael’s piece – and yeah, there is a world of creative possibilities waiting to mined and combined in astounding ways …. so yeah! roll with it …. and isn’t this what it’s all about? ;)
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February 20, 2017 at 10:39 pm
I’m thinking Saturday Mix for sure. Need to speak to Oloriel — make sure she doesn’t mind.
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February 20, 2017 at 10:41 pm
I’m sure she would be happy to oblige …. I based WOW after her Blackout poetry triggered what had been lodged on my brain’s back shelves …. and gave the shout out “point of inspiration” to her :)
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February 20, 2017 at 10:42 pm
She is an extremely creative person.
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February 20, 2017 at 10:44 pm
yes she is! :)
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February 20, 2017 at 5:29 pm
This is a glorious line to say, and oh, how we know it is true (unfortunately, only when at the moment we are not hurting…. which I think is rare….)
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February 20, 2017 at 10:31 pm
Thank you — it was synchronicity that I should get that as my random title! And the image blended so well. Michael and I are very impressed with this writing prompt. We may yet incorporate it into Tale Weavers — with your credit and permission of course.
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February 20, 2017 at 3:49 am
I like it….though I think many might argue with you about pain making you beautiful…..its all in one’s perspective isn’t it..
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February 20, 2017 at 8:12 am
I would agree with you — not sure lines on the face are a good thing.
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