Mark has composed a commentary po.em, coupled with the image, that evokes emotions and pulls out feelings.

Coloring Outside the Lines


In the peripheral vision of your eye

Waving from my attention

Arms out stretched

Fingers feeling in the air

Like shadows in the dark

Lingering memories pull away

Rushing up and over

Only to crawl and slither

Another commentary po.em collaboration between Lorraine, https://myfrillyfreudianslip.wordpress.com, and myself. Her words are in italics. pleas stop by her site and her smaller works at http://in25wordsmoreorless.wordpress.com


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