He sat in the waiting room of a non-descript office. Inside a stale institutional brick building. No thought had been given to design nor comfort. The walls were claustrophobic, hung with gaudy velvet-background still lives. A series of tiny, barred, unwashed high windows filtered in dust-moted light. He thought it the most depressing room he ever had the bad luck to be stuck in.
Dressed uniformly in drab greys, people shuffled in and out of the office. “Prisoners of the system,” he thought. He hoped he never looked so bedraggled and downtrodden. No matter how long he was here.
Finally, an eternity later, his name was called. He blinked in the bright sunlit office space. A stooped figure stood at the huge picture window. “Come over here.” he said.
The view of the prison below was magnificent. The geometric figured domed cell-blocks gleamed in the summer sun. Bright flowers lined the walk-ways filled with visiting day guests. The unique prison garb made it difficult to distinguish guard from guarded.
Laughter drifted up to the office. The prison warden sighed and confessed to his visitor: “Many days I wish I was down there, rather than imprisoned up here.” (197)
(c) Lorraine
For Sunday Photo Fiction February 12, 2017; Photo © Sascha Darlington
February 16, 2017 at 3:47 pm
That was not the ending I expected. Great twist Lorraine.
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February 16, 2017 at 11:17 pm
Thanks — I was thinking in contrasts when I wrote it, and the prison analogy just broke into my thoughts.
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February 14, 2017 at 9:20 am
Great twist …. and it brings to mind the British movie, based on the true story and beginnings of “prison reformation” and transformation ….Greenfingers. Perhaps you have seen it – with Clive Owen?
And yes, as noted before, in another comment string, there is always “context to consider” …. so “freedom is whose truth and wears what skin?”
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February 14, 2017 at 10:00 am
No — I’ll add it to my list. I’ve seen very few movies over the years.
Good quote — freedom is as personal as lust or lifestyle choices. We all have our own sense of freedom, and what we need to be freed from.
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February 14, 2017 at 10:02 am
It’s a wonderful movie – really ….. nothing too hard or heavy, although tissues might be called for here and there ….. well worth it – mostly a comedy of errors but not “stupid” stuff.
thanks – feel free to use it as such – the quote ….
and yup, freedom is a light and open as air and as rooted and binding as earth …. such is life …. fire water air earth …. yin yang
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February 13, 2017 at 5:49 pm
An interesting take, the prison a better place than the office of the warden, then the life he lived on the outside. I wonder how they made those prisoners so happy? Maybe they are drugged in some form or way?
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February 13, 2017 at 5:56 pm
I was thinking of contrasts, and a what if — what if the prisoners had it better than those who ran the system?
Could be drugs, could be a “brave new world” of prisons, maybe better inside the domes than out on the streets?
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February 13, 2017 at 8:26 pm
It’s an interesting train of thought. I like it, it’s different.
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February 13, 2017 at 7:51 am
Yup, it all depends on how you look at it.
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February 13, 2017 at 8:15 am
POV is so interesting from a life and writing perspective.
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February 13, 2017 at 2:15 am
It’s all a matter of perspective! Interesting take on how we live our lives.
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February 13, 2017 at 7:19 am
Thanks — I don’t know quite where that one came from, but I was thinking of contrasts and . . .
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