Another commentary po.em created by Mark from our comment collaborations. Mark has skillfully pulled lines from several different streams to create this very effective po.em
Moving toward the event horizon
Singularity engulfs everything
Time is an illusion
in a silver of moment ecstasy
Sleight of hands, smoke and mirrors
Vision tricks sense of touch
Hearing our emotions
fearing our senses
Blessed by torment
ephemera passing as nostalgia
Talisman of misfortune
Desperately trying to match breaths
lost in the cacophony of heartbeat
Another commentary po.em collaborated with the lovely Lorraine, https://myfrillyfreudianslip.wordpress.com. Her words are italics. These lines were compiled in comment sections along the way.
I'm listening . . . . . .