Another commentary po.em created by Mark from our comment collaborations. Mark has skillfully pulled lines from several different streams to create this very effective po.em

Coloring Outside the Lines

Moving toward the event horizon

Singularity engulfs everything

Time is an illusion

in a silver of moment ecstasy

Sleight of hands, smoke and mirrors

Vision tricks sense of touch

Hearing our emotions

fearing our senses

Blessed by torment

ephemera passing as nostalgia

Talisman of misfortune

Desperately trying to match breaths

lost in the cacophony of heartbeat


Another commentary po.em collaborated with the lovely Lorraine, https://myfrillyfreudianslip.wordpress.com. Her words are italics. These lines were compiled in comment sections along the way.

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