Mark and I have been engaged in wordplay, creating po.etry from the back and forth by interweaving comments in comment threads. The commentary stack po.em is stacking a series of one side’s comments, then the others. Mark’s comments are in normal font, mine are in italics.
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commentary po.em stack: ebb & flow
Mark and I have been engaged in wordplay, creating po.etry from the back and forth by interweaving comments in comment threads. The commentary stack po.em is stacking a series of one side’s comments, then the others. Mark’s comments are in normal font, mine are in italics.
For more of Mark’s commentary po.etry see his blogs: coloring outside the lines and project 21 words. My short micro-bursts are @ in 25 words more or less
Reflections of wants desires
filtered from the past tides
trampled by yesterday’s surf
[still] shimmer like starfish
in inky sea of night sky
in cosmos of pain and chaos
flotsam and jetsam of the soul
swirl in tidal pools of repressed emotions
fate, constellation of indifference
inanimate bits called us and them
distant futures beckon below the horizon
sleep-swimming dreams
snapping at dancing surface
sea tang of tears and need
© Mark & Lorraine
image: (c) Lorraine 2017
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