Another in the series of commentary po.ems by Mark and myself. For more of our complimentary poetry, see: Words Become Necessary, Sometimes Before, Midnight Mirror, and bones of our ancestors.
For more of Mark’s writings, visit his two blogs: Coloring Outside the Lines and project21words. My words are in italics.
frames of haunting moonbeams
reflect in mirrored pools of memory
cold light of day awaiting
warmth of your breathing
and the darkness of your heart
image: © Lorraine
Lorraine's frilly freudian slip 
January 25, 2017 at 8:58 am
Reblogged this on Coloring Outside the Lines and commented:
When two work as one…
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January 25, 2017 at 8:23 am
another fascinating complimentary poem – it really feels and sounds like a conversation between two people – about light and dark as well as deeper philosophical topics – and there is a lovely “quietness” to this …. well done the two of you :)
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January 25, 2017 at 8:41 am
Thanks — one of us with start with a comment that is like a line of poetry (not necessarily to start a po.em ) and then the other replies.
Thanks for the interesting comment!
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January 25, 2017 at 8:50 am
I think you have a really fascinating process at work …. hope you two keep it up :)
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January 25, 2017 at 8:51 am
We think we have invented a new poetry form, but we aren’t sure.
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January 25, 2017 at 8:57 am
hard to say …. I mean, I remember doing this type of collaboration in prose form ages ago – and honestly, I think I’ve seen similar stuff in poetry …. but does it matter if it’s new or not? As long as you enjoy it and what counts is the two voices working with each other – adds a unique perspective and dynamic :)
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