Sometimes comments on posts lead to more. Such as the po.ems developed by Mark and I. This is part in a series. See also: Words Become Necessary, Sometimes Before and Midnight Mirror.
For more of Mark’s writings, visit his two blogs: Coloring Outside the Lines and project21words
Our latest po.em. My words are in italics.
bones of our ancestors
left to bleach in the twilight sun
cracked lips sing upon funeral pyres
quilted into the fabric of being
the ancient chants of the dead
coveted in the dust of dreams
image: JW Waterhouse, The Magic Circle
Lorraine's frilly freudian slip 
January 25, 2017 at 9:01 am
Reblogged this on Coloring Outside the Lines and commented:
Commentary poetry.. Ever hear of it? Here is an example
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January 25, 2017 at 8:27 am
these are wonderful works — from a series of exchanges, something new is born :)
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January 25, 2017 at 8:42 am
Yes, we feel energized (or at least I do) by our incidental collaborations.
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January 25, 2017 at 8:50 am
:)
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