The challenge this week was to create a Baker Street, as designed by Paloma: 1st line 2 syllables; 2nd line 2 syllables: 3 line once syllable beginning with b or something on that order. Bastet suggests some slight tweaks are possible, such as the substituting “b” for another repeating consonant or vowel: Taker Street? : ] :
Bed
when we
share a
bed
lovers
bodies
blaze
passions
fusing
bright
earthy
pleasures
bring
when we
share a
bed
I feel
your heart
beat
I watch
your night
breath
I touch
your warm
back
when we
share a
bed
@ my frilly freudian slip
November 2, 2016 at 12:23 pm
ahhhh…. I love this! Well done … and within such a brief form too … you did it well :)
All the best :)
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November 2, 2016 at 8:23 pm
Thank you. It was tough! :] :
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October 30, 2016 at 6:06 pm
Nice Job, It like How you do it in so few words.
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October 30, 2016 at 5:08 am
You’ve done very well with this one .. it actually reads like a poem should although the forms doesn’t leave much room to work with. Bravo!
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October 30, 2016 at 5:59 am
I had a couple of stanzas in my head, then made a list of b words!
Thanks.
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October 31, 2016 at 2:34 pm
Now that was really resourceful and it worked out nicely :-)
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October 30, 2016 at 2:26 am
Brief
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October 30, 2016 at 2:49 am
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