reflect on
burnt sienna —
golden rod
burnished
tile roofs on stucco houses
autumn made by man
Bastet: “So today what I’d like to ask you to do is create a shadorma following the rules of the classical haiku structure.” Saturday, October 15, 2016.
I get nervous when haiku is mentioned, so my shadorma is a hybrid of classical haiku structure and “haiku-challenged” shadorma.
October 26, 2016 at 4:09 am
This is really splendid .. and very much in the tradition of classical haiku. I really enjoyed this very much.
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October 26, 2016 at 10:03 am
Thank you — glad you enjoyed it. I love the colours of the buildings in the foreground.
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October 28, 2016 at 3:30 am
I agree with you about the buildings … one of the nicer aspects of Medieval towns in Italy are those autumn colours … which can be found throughout the year! :-)
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October 15, 2016 at 8:51 pm
Love your man-made Autumn
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October 16, 2016 at 9:53 am
Thank you.
I was struck by how autumns colours were reflected in the architecture. :]:
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