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. . . purity . . .
I take my last feral breath
fall face forward to the wavy sky
I close my eyes against
the glitter of bubble and sun shards
the water ever esurient
is a million trillion microliths
scrubbing my earthly sillage
so I might take on a watery one
I exalt in my purity
no longer futile
and sink into nothingness
MindLoveMisery’s Menagerie: Wordle 121 and Photo Challenge 131
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Lorraine's frilly freudian slip 
September 22, 2016 at 10:58 am
I love the way you combined the Wordle and Photo inspiration, the poem sends a positive message, but also doesn’t hypocritically eradicate the hardships that are inevitably on the road to being anew.
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September 20, 2016 at 7:34 am
I love the comparison of the water to a million microliths. Beautiful writing
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September 21, 2016 at 7:15 am
Thank you — I wasn’t sure what I’d write until I saw the photo challenge — then I had the image of the water as tiny blades. My vocabulary was certainly enhanced this week.
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September 21, 2016 at 7:31 am
Inspiration is a beautiful thing. I learn so many new words making these Wordles
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September 20, 2016 at 5:41 am
Oh beautiful and I love the descriptive words. :)
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September 21, 2016 at 7:14 am
Thank you, Maria, Yves choses such incredible words for the wordle.
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September 20, 2016 at 1:15 am
Nice use of the wordle and connection to this image….
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September 20, 2016 at 1:17 am
Thanks Michael. I liked your wordle tale.
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September 20, 2016 at 1:18 am
Is that so??? The word esurient had such wonderful applications I found…
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September 20, 2016 at 1:24 am
Yes, and you would find them . . . .
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